I found another problem with the story. They just seem to keep mounting up.
I am still hoping that there is some way of resolving these issues, but as it is, I can’t find it, and I am thinking I have to throw the whole thing in the trash.
This, of course, is very depressing and hasn’t helped much in the mood department or in finding a fix, but I figured I’d better say something.
Even Better than Dreams won’t get updates until I can find a solution or make myself throw it all away.